Riverside Asylum #3

An update to whats been going on this week.

I have started creation on the games second draft. As mentioned last week, I gave a rough explanation as to what happens in each section, but as a result of this some changes were made to the story, so i would need to go back and adjust the template document. That wasn't too much of an issue. However, now that I had the entire second draft done, I decided to send it to Master's student for feedback. This student would comment on aspects of the word document, giving us his opinion on aspects of the story and telling us what could possibly be done better.

As shown within the screenshot below Michael questions our narrative several different times and in different ways, giving us recommendations as to alternatives or explaining to us as an external third party how he perceives those ideas. Using those Idea's and feedback, I would alter several different aspects of the second draft, giving me everything I needed to start the storyboard.

I had also started work on the storyboard, doing a few panels, however these needed more work and the rest of the panels for the storyboard I felt as if needed to be worked on a little more, so after completing the first two panels, I decided I would work on both the storyboard and the script in unison. This would allow me to knock out both things together while continuing to feed the team valuable information that would contribute to the prototype and the specifics of select aspects of the game.